I think I'd like to see her make more direct eye contact with the creepy guy than she does. Specifically on that first look, I think she should clearly look directly at him at least for eight frames or so. It would make it more clear that she has observed him & she thinks he is a creeper. Nice work! You're almost to the promise land!
I think I'd like to see her make more direct eye contact with the creepy guy than she does. Specifically on that first look, I think she should clearly look directly at him at least for eight frames or so. It would make it more clear that she has observed him & she thinks he is a creeper. Nice work! You're almost to the promise land!
ReplyDeleteGood idea. Ill see what I can do to improve that. Thank you unicorn.
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