JClark Final animation. "Tim the Bouncer of Pain!"

Please help me out and critique as hard as you can, I wanna improve as much as I can. thanks.

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Sergio Final

Jennifer Baker Animation

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Elysse Czopek Final

Well here is my Final, for this class. I must say that I am not an animator really. No really. I learned a lot of knowledge about animation, and how we interact with our body language. I would like to say thank you to any of my classmates who have helped me along the term, as I have helped them with their projects.

Elysse Czopek

Final

Elysse Czopek Critiques

Hey All,
So Here is my animation so far. It still needs some major splinning/ work. Please disregard the first segment of the video since It is wrong and, I have really only worked on the poses.  Could, you all please critique the second half of my animation.

Elysse Czopek

Adding weight.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rtuYftGfsWM&feature=youtu.be