Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Looking for comments.

Here is the front portion so far. I'm looking for comments on the movement of the painting stroke and the relax bit right after. Try to ignore the tray in the background...




or this if that doesn't work:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f4_KCHNtiAE

Thanks,
Lance

2 comments:

  1. I wasn't among the critique yesterday, but I think if you had a bit more overlap on the tip of the brush as he's pulling the brush back to look at the painting, it would give a better feel to the weight of the brush.


    I would run a cMotionTrail and give it lots of cushion into the flick of the brush and the settling at the end.

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  2. That's a great point, thanks. I'll add it to my list.

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