Dakota's Pitch

I changed my pitch slightly so my pictures are different but essentially the same.
Pitch:

The scene opens up to a kid smashing computer monitors with a baseball bat in a store. The manager walks over to the kid and says, (Audio: Wheatley from Portal 2)“You know what I have too many of around here? Monitors.” He reaches for the bat while the kid was surprised by his reaction. “I was just thinking earlier today I wish I had fewer monitors that were working. So you're actually helping me by smashing them.” Then the screen cuts to black.

The first and second shot is switched.